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Superfluous

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A superfluous life
Cut short by a knife?
That's not what you are.  
You're a shining star.  
You haven't yet even begun to fly,
So, do me a favor and please don't die.  
I've been burned in fires and drowned in rain.  
I know sorrow and I know pain.  
Watching my own grandfather die
Cut me to the heart, I had to cry.  
You may not believe me when I say this is true,
But just imagine if this happened to you.  
If anyone has faced a major tragedy,
You can share it here or talk to me.  
You may feel like no one knows you are there,
But there will always be someone who will care.  
Don't commit suicide. I watched my own grandfather die in a hospital bed, not as a result of suicide, but it still hurt. If anyone has faced a major tragedy, you can share it here or send me a note if you want to talk. I'm not here to judge anyone. There will always be someone who cares, whether you know it or not.
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rosie2322's avatar
Great message behind this! c: Almost nothing is worth killing yourself over, but too many people do it over reasons like bullying or overloads of grief.